I began thinking about
this several days ago. What drove me to go from historical research
into creating people around which historical events and people
whirled?
I can't remember when I
didn't enjoy historical fiction. I don't remember exactly which book
it was but do seem to think it had to do with Greece or Rome. [I was
also deeply immersed in SciFi. If that was the case, why don't I try
to write SciFi? I know! It's because I don't have the science
background it takes to do it properly.]
This all came about as I
was writing the story of the Frenchman Bouchard who attacked el
presidio de Monte Rey and then sailed south
to lay waste to the area around Misión
Santa Bárbara.
How
could I personalize this? Put people into the story? In writing this
fourth novel, I changed my Main Characters to James, the son of
Timothy Beadle, and his best friend, David, an Esselen Indian from
the Carmel Valley. What would this event mean to them, their
families, and the people around them?
At
the same time, I strove to include the feelings and reactions of the
victims of the attack, the soldiers of the presidio
and their officers. How would Captain de Vega feel at seeing his
command decimated, smoke rising from buildings so laboriously
built? What
would the people of Carmel do to help?
And,
when it was all over, what would the repercussions be?
Historically,
we know the civilians were sent from Monte
Rey
to
Misión Soledad.
We also know the deadbeat civilians at Villa
de Branciforte
would panic at hearing about the pirate raid and ransack the nearby
Misión
Santa Cruz.
How would that affect the MCs and the people of Carmel?
It's
actually a whole lot of fun trying to figure out how to do that –
then actually turn it into words!
Well,
here's an excerpt from the first, very rough draft,
James
and David followed close behind, with Timothy and Jaime staying
behind with the wagons carrying food and clothing. They had no idea
what condition the soldiers were and the friars came along with
medicines.
Captain
de Vega sat on a charred stump used to moor visiting fishing boats,
one of the most disheartened men either had ever seen. He held his
head in his hands, furious and ashamed at the same time.
Felipe
rushed to Juanita Maria, embracing their son and daughter, along with
their grandchildren. She laughed with joy to find him only lightly
wounded, but fussed until she removed the rough field dressing and
replaced it with a better one.
While
that was underway, the women went among the soldiers strewn before
the earthen wall facing the sea, inspecting for wounds. Most had
scrapes and bruises. Three had been killed and a half dozen lay on
makeshift stretchers made by the pirates the friars immediately
tended to.
Fray
Carnicer
knelt throughout, fingering his prayer beads and confessing his sins
and weaknesses. When, at last, Fray
Sarria was able to make him speak, he could only weep and declare how
he had failed the men of the presidio
and his oat to his Lord God.
Don
Pablo Soler, the surgeon, lay upon one of the cots, his leg skewed
from where it had been hit but a musket ball. He had tried using a
crutch to help the wounded, only making the fracture in his leg worse
to the point of severe bleeding. He bit down on a piece of leather as
James and David pulled with all their might to reset the bone.
Fortunately,
The Queen, the Carlita, and several other fishing boats arrived,
carrying enough fish to allay the hunger of the soldiers. People from
the pueblo
had arrived and eagerly took away some fish for their cook fires.
How
does that make you react?
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